Jealous

Jealous

"Jealous" she asked
then asnwered with a lie.
Jealous you laugh,
jealous I cry.
Jealous you scream,
jealous I deny.
Jealous you ask,
but answer with a lie.
Jealous i'm not,
but jealous you stay.
Jealous the world?
jealous your not
Jealous I am,
can you say not?
Jealous you live
jealous I die.
Jealous you dream
jealous I sigh.
Jealous you ask?
Jealous you are,
can I ask why?

By:Tiffany

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

Interesting vibe I got from this piece. I almost think it's coming from the thoughts of one person standing in front of a mirror..looking back upon herself. The words are her protaganistic and Antaganistic thoughts at odds with eachother.

It flows smooth...even with the use of "Jealous" so many times.
A great piece of writing..Most surely a thinker.

Aaron Maycroft