ODD CARD OUT

ODD CARD OUT

A Poem by The Ace of Broken Hearts
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my favorite poem, my signature

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Shuffle the deck

Deal the cards

Shuffle again

Fifty-two cards

Thirteen to a suit

Four suits

Now shuffle me in

Fifty-three cards

Four suits of thirteen

 

But where am i?

 

Im in the firth suit

A suit of one

The suit starts at one

One is the ace

Spade, club, diamond, and heart

 

Which one am i?

 

I am the hearrt that never fits in

Because someone broke me

And they tossed me out of the deck

 

I am an ace

I am a heart

I am broken

 

What am I?

 

I am the Ace of Broken Hearts

© 2009 The Ace of Broken Hearts


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oooooh! *shivers* This is fun and magical! It makes me think of a trick performed right before my eyes. You perhaps just appearing! This poem makes me smile but a surprised smile. Its a hard feeling to describe but I love the way you wrote it!

I like the style and flow. It is in black and white but its full of color!

~raindropoflife

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a creative, fresh, and original piece..........WELL DONE

Posted 14 Years Ago


good job. clear and concise. hope to see more soon :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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