Sleepiness

Just another poem I made . It didn't feel right at first but after a couple changes I felt pretty good with it.

Go to sleep darling
For in the morning,
Your life shall be over.
Oh your sleepiness,
Your time has come,
For you to leave this world,
Do not leave without love.
For you shall die with a broken heart without,
Not because you no longer live with the loving,
But so your soul dies happy,
And your soul shall remember the love that I have showed you throughout the years.
Oh your sleepiness,
baby I have always loved you,
But now the time has come,
For you to fall asleep.
I don't wish for you to be broken on this sad day so let me tell you this,
I loved you, and my time has come to say this:
"I love you more now,
More than I ever have before
I am sad in a way,
Yet proud in a way.
Sad to say that you will be gone,
Proud to say that I was the one to show this love to you all along.
I am sorry that I couldn't be there when you needed me the most sometimes.
I will miss you.
Goodbye sweetheart,
I love you."
Oh dear sleepiness,
For the cancer has over come this body, a body,
So strong of heart but too weak to fight the terror in her body.
Oh, dear sleepiness,
How could you bring such pain into this world?

Author's Note

If my grammar or words don't make sense sometimes, its more likely a typo. Sorry if there is any that I have missed to correct. I have never lost a friend or loved one to cancer, but breast cancer does run in the family. I also feel that this writing can go with the fear of losing a loved one or losing one to anything in general. Please put your feedback :) I will greatly appreciate it!

Reviews

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

I lost my grandmother to cancer, beautiful woman I miss. This was a interesting and heavy read, heavy meaning deep. For your age, outstanding, I'm sure as your life experiences deepen you will revisit and possibly revise this to add even more emotional impact.

[Alanna Nox]

This is beautiful Sean! So compassionate and so touching, great work!(:

~Nox

[Sean Peyres]

Thank you! That means a lot to me! I'll do my best for each work :)