A Night of Passion

I moved my fingers through your silky hairs

Passionately kissed you and you equally reciprocated

We were drunk in love

Rivers of passion flowing down our veins

 

I promised to take care of you

Come whatever circumstances may

We danced and danced all night long

Sweet music playing all along

 

I wished for the night to never end

Wished the morning sun never set

Wanted to hold you in my arms forever

Just you and me, no one else to remember

Reviews

[Harry Kriz]

Your poem is easy to read and understand. It feels good to read. I think, you can add some literary words into your poem. But overall it's awesome.