Dear

Short poem

I must say, you will be missed dearly

As it stands, I can hardly let you go

But, dear, after you have pushed me as far as you have,

Through all I’ve put up with,

I’m absolutely pissing myself at the opportunity to be your bestest friend!

I’ve decided I’m quite finished with your s**t, dear.

Reviews

[Seshat Nidaba]

I never thought I'd reply this to a poem, but "lol" I guess is the most appropriate term. You just hit on something very universal, we go that extra mile for people we really like, but the lack of reciprocity sometimes is just gawd-awful! hehe, such is timing and inappropriate feelings, that's life.

[emma]

love the last sentence. really creative :)

[NaCl]

Hah, nice its sorta got this darkly adorable tone, like a killer doll if that makes sense.

[Ronn Michael Salinas]

hahaha "dear"

[Andrea]

Nicely written and I like the veiled sarcasm, biting without being nasty!