Tree

I'm a tree, you're a tree

one is strong and one is weak

one stands firm while the other sways

barely makes it through the day

barely survives the stormy fray

the tranquil days

it lost its way

I lost my way

Reviews

[Allen Wayne]

Love it! Powerful and simple.

[Calli]

I liked the comparison start, but it was strange how it started with two branches (pardon the pun) and ended up with a description of only one tree type. But then again, maybe it's supposed to be like that. Hmm... ponder ponder ponder...