I'm sorry I never told you...

I'm sorry I never told you...

A Story by KristaK
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This isn't a story, it's a letter. Like it, love it, hate it, I don't care.

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My one true love,

I can't believe you're gone. It's been three years, and every year I still have to go to your grave to try and convince myself that you are gone. I miss you. you meant the world to me, the only one who could make me smile when I was having a bad day. The only one I loved to spend time with. We hung out, we had good times, and great times. I can't remember a single bad one. 

I never told you, and I wish I could have done it, but I was too shy. I wanted to tell you, every year I thought about telling you. I love you. But, you did what I wanted, and now you're gone. It's my fault, I take the blame. I love you. I hate myself for that night, if only I could do it all over again, I'd do what you wanted, I would save you. I love you. I would tell you, I would finally get the courage to say it.

I realize now that the time we have with the ones we love is shorter then we want. It always will be, because no one can live forever. But the love we had can live on. It can go on forever, and I know mine will always go on for you. I love you, and I wish you were still here. I miss your smile. Maybe one day I'll see it again.

I love you,
Your one true love.

© 2008 KristaK


Author's Note

KristaK
Ignore grammar, look for a meaning, relate to it.

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you are a finalist, someone with such emotion, deserves such when it is evident in your writing


yours truly
S.E.Conway

Posted 15 Years Ago


Damn that was beautiful! Well done. You're awesome at writing dark!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Look for the meaning?!?! How can one not? With such heart wrenching words, it is almost impossible to feel such sympathy for such a tortured soul. Every with grammar erros, the piece is a true form of poetry fromt he heart.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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KristaK
KristaK

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My name is Krista and I'm currently a freshman in college. I've decided to return to my writing after a couple of years off. Hopefully I haven't lost my ability. more..

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