A Bit Beyond You

A Bit Beyond You

A Poem by UpComesDown

I hate this.
I hate what you do to me.
I hate how you make me feel inside,
Every time I see you,
Every time you touch me,
Every time we kiss.
Why do you put me through this hell?
You obviously don't want me,
So why pretend??
You know what?
F**k you.
Yeah, I said it.
Why do you care?
Oh right,
You don't. 
I loved you!
I still f*****g love you!
But then I see you with him...
And it kills me on the inside.
You never wanted me.
Well, not just me.
You needed him too.
You f*****g c**t.
I hate you!


...I love you...

© 2011 UpComesDown


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wow...

Posted 12 Years Ago


True and explosive, vivid imagery and titled emotion, well done, great read.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 30, 2011
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