Water

just read it.

Water.

I'm at a loss,

I begin to miss someone I've never even met yet,

I can feel them,

Circling, In pain.

Author's Note

This sounds... well dumb, but I've always felt as if she's out there -the one that it is. But since there's like 7 billion people in the world the chances of us meeting are astronomical at best. Still, she might be sitting in her room one day browsing the net randomly and stumble on to this -or something like that.

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

This isn't dumb one bit, like you think. It holds such truth that someone is put on this Earth for us, but they could be anywhere. Hell, they could be our next door neighbor, even! But we never know until our heart is truly set and is willing to give everything to make that person seem just right for us. As long as we are happy, that's all that matters. Love is such a precious and delicate thing, it takes time to find the right person. We much remember that "love is patient, love is kind."

[VALENTINE]

Thank you I needed that, I stared writing because of her who she might be. I figured I'd travel the. Globe once I get published and as soon as I saw her I'd know, know? Cause everything I write is either for her or about her so I'm with her even when I'm not. In my writing.

[I Am Svetlana]

That's so adorable...I often do that too. If ever I want to be near or close to someone who isn't near me, I just write about them. Talking about all I admire and like about them, how they could make me smile if they were here. How much I miss them. And I hope to travel the world one day to help my writing, I feel it would help with inspiration and being open to new things.

[VertoAtrum]

There's a lot of fish in the sea, but first one must endure the current and waves.
Nice poem, simple, but meaningful.

[tyson]

for your sake I hope she does read this. Cause it was pretty well f*****g written

[FlatLineBeauty]

This is far from dumb. Actually this is something everyone feels at one time or another, it's romantic and tragic at the same time. The words and length are perfect, because you present the thought which makes my mind start to wonder about things like that. It's an inspiration, yet a connection at the same time. Xo Winter

[VALENTINE]

thanx "Sadistic Karma" much aprish, i'll definitely check out your stuff as well.

[Sami Khalil]

"I'm at a loss,




I begin to miss someone I've never even met yet,




I can feel them,




Circling, In pain"

Simply touching...:)............

[VertoAtrum]

Interesting and emotional. You can feel the longing in the words. I'm sure one day you'll find someone :)

[VALENTINE]

one can only hope.

[Sami Khalil]

The way I read this is that you are saying that fate is just as important as water. We can't live without it and its pain...Bravo...................

[VALENTINE]

As usual thank you Sami, very sure you understood it. Wasn't sure people would grasp the pseudo emotional relation with water. But you did. So Bravo to you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......

[Teeya]

Well when you break it down and define your reason for penning this piece, it sounds less "dumb"LOL!!! No but seriously, there is a truth to this because until you have that one person who you feel in your spirit was made for you, you feel as though something is missing and you can't explain what it is until the moment "it" becomes real...there's is no time or age limit as to when you might receive your "soul mate", but there is a need for the desire and patience to receive him/her, and when/if you do, be grateful you were one of the 7 billion people made whole by finding the better half of yourself...thanks for sharing (and don't call anything you pen dumb...let the reader determine for self:))

[VALENTINE]

LOL thanx Teeya and i appreciate the honesty. I'm not sure about soul mate as a concept rooted in realism however i do think there are people you simply click with and it works up until the point it doesn't, i just never seem to meet any. Anyway thank you very much for reading & i'll take a pic at your stuff.
P.S - (him/her) definitely a her lol...