Can't You See

Can't You See

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Can't you see how she is tearing us apart
How she is ripping our foundation out at the seams
How she hates to see you with me
Can't you see that our friendship is failing
Our love is dwindling
Can't you see that she will not stop till its done
Till we are over
Please, Can't You See

© 2009 ;


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A very, very powerful piece. When this happens the person you try to tell most of the time just cannot see what is going on right in front of them. It is agony and tourcher for the one watching it all fall apart and no matter what they do it does not seem to help. A wonderful write!!!


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