Fabricated Comfort

Feeling pretty melty today.

Make me a friend
Out of clay and pillows
Something soft and touchable
Something I can squeeze
Make it smell like coffee in the morning
Make it hold me and giggle at night
Something that coos in my ear
And smiles
At silliness

Reviews

[SoozProtege]

Short and sweet, awesome and wonderful.
Great lines:
Make it smell like coffee in the morning
Make it hold me and giggle at night

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Lol thx.
This one was actually waaaaaa...
...aaaay longer at first. Then I cut it down to size,
And now it's much cleaner.

[SoozProtege]

Your welcome. Great caliber of care i see you putting into your work. I believe you would like my pieces.

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Ginsberg was a heavy editor of his own work, where Kerouac was a stream of consciousness author. They argued frequently which was the "truest" form of expression.
I believe they were both wrong. And both right.
Realization of your goals can only come through insight and reflection, both. So I pretty much just ramble and ramble until it looks too long, and then go back at it like Edward Goddamned Scissorhands.

[SoozProtege]

Haha, funny enough I just wrote a line with Edward scissorhands in mind... "Your the kind of person that deserves a high-five with knife-hands." Awesome lol

[Ana Papaya]

Love it! Sounds like a perfect companion.
Except they'd wind up in pieces if you dropped them so should probably come with a "Handle with Care" label

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

oh... I would *never* drop them
Not if they were *that* cuddly.