Now! 25% less filler!

Now! 25% less filler!

A Poem by Vagrant Mongrel
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Old, but still improved.

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With so much less of me here
I feel like so much more.
The same amount of sugar
Concentrated down and repackaged
With bold colors and new flash.
Now sitting proudly on display
Catching eyes and turning heads,
Positively dying to give you a cavity.

© 2020 Vagrant Mongrel


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and with the Dentist COVID 19ing

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vagrant Mongrel

1 Day Ago

Brought my son the other day...
You'd think they were enriching uranium in there.
Dave Brown

1 Day Ago

......funny............
A highly concentrated dose of sweetness can really hit the spot but not always in a good way.
The rush is lovely but can't be sustained in a healthy way. Just my thoughts. :)

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vagrant Mongrel

1 Day Ago

Sounds like a challenge!
You're on. I'll report back in a year or so.
(Fair warning, i.. read more
Ana Papaya

1 Day Ago

August 3, 2021.
I'll be waiting for you to report back.

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Added on August 2, 2020
Last Updated on August 2, 2020
Tags: Nonsense, insanity, sweet, sugar, chocolate, candy, cavity

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Vagrant Mongrel
Vagrant Mongrel

North Providence, RI



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Not a writer, but I do it anyway. I'm also not a chef, musician, masseuse, guidance counselor, philosopher, or survivalist. But again: never stopped me before. I DO, however, happen to be a giant p.. more..

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