Now! 25% less filler!

Now! 25% less filler!

A Poem by Dripping Chocolate Madness
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Old, but still improved.

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With so much less of me here
I feel like so much more.
The same amount of sugar
Concentrated down and repackaged
With bold colors and new flash.
Now sitting proudly on display
Catching eyes and turning heads,
Positively dying to give you a cavity.

© 2020 Dripping Chocolate Madness


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and with the Dentist COVID 19ing

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

3 Years Ago

Brought my son the other day...
You'd think they were enriching uranium in there.
Dave Brown

3 Years Ago

......funny............
A highly concentrated dose of sweetness can really hit the spot but not always in a good way.
The rush is lovely but can't be sustained in a healthy way. Just my thoughts. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

3 Years Ago

Sounds like a challenge!
You're on. I'll report back in a year or so.
(Fair warning, i.. read more
Ana Papaya

3 Years Ago

August 3, 2021.
I'll be waiting for you to report back.

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Added on August 2, 2020
Last Updated on August 2, 2020
Tags: Nonsense, insanity, sweet, sugar, chocolate, candy, cavity

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Dripping Chocolate Madness
Dripping Chocolate Madness

Wandering, RI



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Not a writer, but I do it anyway. I'm also not a chef, musician, masseuse, guidance counselor, philosopher, or survivalist. But again: never stopped me before. I DO, however, happen to be a giant p.. more..

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