The Littlest Killer

Magical creatures. Danger.

She's in my eyes
When I rise
I can taste her in my coffee
And when in bed,
In my head
There's a voice made out of toffee
I am lost
That's the cost
Of following a fairie
But oh my...
What if I
Caught her...
Would she spare me?

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I love this whimsical way of saying there's something following me! I love the details you choose to set your scene, it really comes together as a scene we can relate to, yet also bright & original-sounding. This could be taken literally, like there's some elf hanging out there, or it could be figurative, like I still wake up to the voices in my head! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Thx :)
It's a little bit of both, I think?

[Tania Mo]

I like the contradiction at end
You gotta be so careful with fairies lol

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Yes indeed.
But man, I'll tell you...
Worth it.

[Tania Mo]

coffee and toffee always worth it man

[Ana Papaya]

Are you chasing chocolate fairies in your dreams?
This is cute. :)
A touch of whimsy with a touch of charm.
I don't know why but I imagine a toffee voice sounding like one of those sexy southern belles.

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Close, but that'd be molasses

[Reinrose]

Toffee voice...delicious.

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

:)
Candy is dandy

Good morning, Sunshine!