Margie in Chargie

Margie in Chargie

A Poem by Dripping Chocolate Madness
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Most likely 'At Largey'

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Margie, Margie...
Puddin' pop.
Your reviews...
They make me drop.
I don't know how
you always seem
To always know
What people mean
But I'll tell you...
My oh my...
Quite often
They make me cry.
(And if you're wondering how I learned your name...
I'm pointing discretely right at Dave)

© 2020 Dripping Chocolate Madness


Author's Note

Dripping Chocolate Madness
It was on his review. We don't speak.
At least... Not anymore...
Not ever since the...
Nevermind.

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In school, my name was stingingly mocked with "Marge at Large" or some such rhyming epithet. Also, I've never enjoyed being "in charge" even tho I understand you mean it as a compliment! Aside from those initial freak-outs, I am totally flummoxed by your flattering poem. I'm reading the Dalia Lama right now, trying to get down the 8 tenets of Buddhism & one is to put other people above oneself. That is the tenet I try to employ when I review people becuz the best way to boost someone's tendency to write is to boost their feelings about self. When a review is largely corrective, it really deflates a writer & then instead of better writing, we often get NO writing. For me, it's all just a numbers game . . . putting it in so I can take quite a bit out (I'm just a dull-headed nimwit without the inspirational influence of reading all the amazing poets here!) Thank you for pumping up my ego to a dangerous level. I need to go for cup #2 & pipeload #1 of the day (at 6 am) to balance out this big ego trip you put me on! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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Dripping Chocolate Madness

1 Week Ago

:)
I only meant it as the best possible compliment.
I'm very happy you liked it!
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barleygirl

1 Week Ago

My dogs always enjoy a little early morning puff . . .



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In school, my name was stingingly mocked with "Marge at Large" or some such rhyming epithet. Also, I've never enjoyed being "in charge" even tho I understand you mean it as a compliment! Aside from those initial freak-outs, I am totally flummoxed by your flattering poem. I'm reading the Dalia Lama right now, trying to get down the 8 tenets of Buddhism & one is to put other people above oneself. That is the tenet I try to employ when I review people becuz the best way to boost someone's tendency to write is to boost their feelings about self. When a review is largely corrective, it really deflates a writer & then instead of better writing, we often get NO writing. For me, it's all just a numbers game . . . putting it in so I can take quite a bit out (I'm just a dull-headed nimwit without the inspirational influence of reading all the amazing poets here!) Thank you for pumping up my ego to a dangerous level. I need to go for cup #2 & pipeload #1 of the day (at 6 am) to balance out this big ego trip you put me on! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Dripping Chocolate Madness

1 Week Ago

:)
I only meant it as the best possible compliment.
I'm very happy you liked it!
.. read more
barleygirl

1 Week Ago

My dogs always enjoy a little early morning puff . . .
Yup. It's TRUE
I gotta agree.
When Margie pops by
It's always a treat

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

Awwww gawrsh! Thanks you two for giving me a big head. Good thing I live in the big wild outdoors, s.. read more
Ana Papaya

1 Week Ago

Lol!!!!! :)
Happy to inflate your ego anytime...

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Not a writer, but I do it anyway. I'm also not a chef, musician, masseuse, guidance counselor, philosopher, or survivalist. But again: never stopped me before. I DO, however, happen to be a giant p.. more..

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