"Would You?"

 

  "Would You ?"

 

If I crawled inside...

Would you keep me warm;

Wrap and hold me close,

Keep me safe from harm?

 

Could I snuggle tightly...

To your broad chest;

Lay...my weary head,

While I find...eternal rest?

 

If I crawled inside...

Would you hold me tight;

Chase away all fears...

Free my darkest...nights?

 

If I held out my heart...

And soul...to you...

Would you flee or stay;

Just what would you do?

     Valentine

 

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. It gently asked the questions of to stay or flee? I liked the softness and the needs of the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry dear Poet.
Coyote

[Rylan Batten]

Doing what you do best, Valentine. Keep it up.

[Angelic Darkness]

This is vulerable, romantic, I believe what we all seek.
Your words are flowy, very dreamy as well.

keep up the good work..AD