"Just Not"

  "Just Not"

 

He stands...heart in hand,

Not outstanding, nor "fair of face".

Longing inside for a love,

To just show...one trace...

 

Of recognition, in her beautiful eyes.

For she sees not...from where love comes.

He stands and cries...he wonders why?

He offers all...yet receives none,

 

Of love's promises;he has so much to give,

But..."just not" fair of face he exists, yet never lives.

 

  Valentine

 

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Reviews

[Bohrium Guy]

Very nice and I can relate so well, nicely penned my dear friend...

Dostani AKA Brat Rat