This heartbreak

This heartbreak

A Poem by Raven Dye
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This is to my ex fiance i wrote this two weeks after he left me. but this point

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I cant believe you hurt me
Stabbed me in the back
You completely blindsided me
Turned the world around me black

I can't believe I loved you..
I already gave you so much
You sent my body shivering
With just a single touch

You treated me like nothing
I treated you like gold
I promise you will regret this
I'll be avenged sevenfold

I'll soon stop this crying
Then i'll be okay..
Then you'll regret you lost me
I swear you'll see that day..

And when you want me back
The day I swear you do
I'll have already moved on
And this heartbreak will be on you....

© 2009 Raven Dye


Author's Note

Raven Dye
ever felt like this?
Heartbroken but strong at the same time?
You know your weak in many ways but you still try to pull threw.
Your angry and disapointed?
Shocked and confused?
tell me about it...

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I love it... it shows such strength in character and knowing your own worth... wonderfully expressed and I saw right on. For they wil regret it and you will find someone better and more deserving.

Posted 14 Years Ago


You really captured the emotions of what one goes through when the person they love and who they thought loved them back leaves. It's emotions I have felt and reading this made me remember how horrible they were. However in the end you always come out stronger. Nice job. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 13, 2009

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Raven Dye
Raven Dye

Bluefield , WV



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My writing name Raven Dye. I've been threw a lot in my life so far. I'm 16 years young. Im constantly thinking of new poems and stories and most importantly lyrics. Comments are allowable. I dont car.. more..

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