Gloria

There she was when I woke up.

Overshadowed by the cries of heaven

Tiptapping noisily from above

Vague pitch from your tone unheard and unclear

Much too soft for a voice of an angel

May it matter not

For your eyes dazzle in the light

Everything stops when you smile

It's framed in my mind

Your face frowns when in doubt

It shines when you figure it out

It glows when you stroke your hair aside

It rests beautifully when there's something in your mind

How can your eyes smile?

You're beautiful without try

It's freezing but not when you're around

It's very nice to meet you

Reviews

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Too much appreciation of a beauty...how startling she might be!!
All that pretties isn't good to health .... take care....and thanks for this beautiful read☺!!

[AizenJ]

Thank you.. It's just poetry written. I just wanted to write something about how I would like to feel about someone. Thanks for the advice tho and I'm glad you liked this poem. >_

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I know that you already know...that you're already welcomed!😀