When You Left

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I am more lost than you know.

 I cant even find the shore.

Left to drift on the deep blue sea.

Dying from the thirst of love.

 Looking to the sky for rain, surrounded by water I can not drink.

My reflection the only eyes on me.

Screaming but no one to hear.

Forced to look away I can no longer be.

Sinking in the dark, crying in the water.

Love’s nomad, with no place to call home.

Reviews

[theunionisloud]

I liked this alot... loved it, really. It's a very unique idea drawn out really well. I love, love, love the idea of dying of love's thirst in an ocean of water. Very creative... "My reflection the only eyes on me". Wow, what good am I? I'm basically telling re-telling you your poem. Beautiful... just beautiful!