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A Poem by Victoria
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My deepest battles

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He has eyes you can drown in but I am reluctant to swim, he is very charming and has fire within. He can make me happy and he can make me sad but I don't want him to see the true me Because no one ever has, no, I don't mean my shell I mean my soul for I fear if he looks within I will lose control. So here is my version I have made for myself the picture I paint for everyone else.

© 2018 Victoria


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i like the poem for the metaphor use and the mystique

Posted 6 Years Ago


Victoria

6 Years Ago

Thank you(:
sette

6 Years Ago

you are wekcome
Beautiful
I love this
Very true to me too

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Victoria

6 Years Ago

Thank you(: I’m happy you relate as well

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Added on March 23, 2018
Last Updated on March 23, 2018
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Victoria
Victoria

Seattle, WA



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Hey! My name is Victoria, I am 20 years old and I live in Seattle Washington. Poetry has always been a good outlet for me and it has helped through a lot. I love reading other people’s poetry to.. more..

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