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A Poem by Velvet.Acid

We both might go tomorrow,

Babe, shed no more tears

There is no time for sorrow.

 

We live on time that’s borrowed,

We have no time for fear

We both might go tomorrow.

 

Oh babe, will you follow?

Just a kiss to the lips, my dear.

There is no time for sorrow.

 

Don’t mourn for those who’re hollow,

Trust in me, babe, no fear

We both might go tomorrow.

 

Your flesh is warm; your mind is shallow,

Live for today, babe, lay with me here

There is no time for sorrow.

 

Let go, be free, your anxiety swallowed.

Carpe Diem, no rules which to adhere.

We both might go tomorrow,

There is no time for sorrow.   

© 2010 Velvet.Acid


Author's Note

Velvet.Acid
Yet another villanelle! I swear this is my last one :) My inspiration for this was "Grace" by Jeff Buckley and Marvell's "To His Coy Mistress".

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I like this so much, alot of emotion. Great job

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow, I love it, great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Velvet.Acid
Velvet.Acid

Newcastle, Australia



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I'm a second year college student studying Teaching, majoring in English and minoring in writing and religion. I'm not that great at creative writing, but I give it a go and that's the main thing. more..

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