Heartbroken and Hopeless

The tears, slowly flowing from her dark,brown eyes.

A river, flowing down her perfect, pale skin.

Curled up in a ball, she sits in the corner of her dimly-lit room.

Its killing her.

The pain inside her chest.

It feels like nothing else will ever hurt this much.

Slowly, she gets up.

Walking towards the washroom, her feet seem to be cemented in the ground.

Her mind is screaming 'STOP! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?' , but she keeps walking.

A quick look in the mirror, she sees her torn up face.

Her eyes are now baggy and red from the sleepless nights and days of tears.

Her lips in a permanent frown.

Her hair, once cut  so neatly, is now messy and unkept.

And the she does what she'll regret the most.

Picking up her razor, she brings it towards her wrists.

' STOP' screams her mind, but she continues.

Nothing beats the pain that she already feels.

The pain of a broken heart. 

A drop of blood falls silently to the floor.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Glenna.]

Great ending! That was probably my favorite line!
"A drop of blood falls sliently to the floor".
Really sets the mood. I mean, the whole poem has a mood from the beginning, but that ending is the icing on the cake. You're good. Keep on keepin' on, and you'll be surprised at what other pieces of amazingness you can write. :)

[NickyGL]

to some it up?...... one word? epic! lol i like it