Beautifully flawed

A quick poem a wrote for some one's birthday.

Beautifully Flawed,

Dreams which coexist,

An act in which leaves other appalled,

Contemplating, this gorgeous earthquake can it subsist?

Nightmares smashed into concrete,

Knees get stronger, breath gets shorter,

Preparing for the next fleet,

Wishing wells, are filled with toned quarters,

Reviews

[Anusha Prabhu]

Nice work. Looks like your words are coming from depths!

[Victorandrew]

aw thank you (: , yeah every bit means something. I hate words that suck, haha they give it less umph. haha if you get what i'm saying.

[Just Kim]

loved that last line, this is amazing

[Victorandrew]

thank you :)