On Regret

Free-verse short poem

I have a ten-page resume,
And a one-page life,
Footnote my regret.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Excellent brevity that says a lot in few words.
We all have those regrets as the poet stated marvelously.
Some capitulate, others learn lessons.

[MCS]

Seeing those lines in black and white made my breath catch. I’m guilty of that. Powerful verse.

[Victor D. Lopez]

Thank you for your kind words. Working hard to achieve success is important. But we should not sacrifice equally or more important aspects of life on the altar of our professions. Don't leave for tomorrow what you can do today is good advice. But so it don't defer for tomorrow what you should enjoy today as today will never come again, and tomorrow is always uncertain.

[Mars August]

That is bleak, my friend. I like that you brought the theme of slaving away your life for things that ultimately don't fulfill you. And in such short measure.

[Victor D. Lopez]

Thank you for your feedback. Appreciated!

[Beren]

This is really strong... unfortunately. So powerful.

[Victor D. Lopez]

Thank you for your feedback. Much appreciated. Alas, it is is not fiction but a sad truth. We often spend enormous energies on lesser valuable pursuits while putting aside "for later" much more important ones, assuming there will always be more time . . .

Thanks again!

Victor

[Beren]

Without living we would not know what is important and what is not. Don't be regret. You did the best you know at the time. I want to believe that🌸