Fade away..

Fade away..

A Poem by Victoria Lee~

 

I cannot
see or hear you
Yet  I know you are there
Every night, every day
Judging me
Watching
every move I make
Analyzing
every word I write
Twisting everything I say
into something about you
Narcissistic
 Pessimistic
 Maybe even
psychotic
You are
A fading piece of the past
that I prefer not to remember
I only have the scars from your attacks
to remind me you ever were
 The knife to the back
 should cause you the most shame
But it was your insane, angry words
that caused me the most pain
Just like the bruises left on my soul
You're just a memory
fading away
A sad scene
Just a bad dream
Fading away
Fade 
away
 
 
 
 
 
          
 
 

© 2008 Victoria Lee~


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I love the color and structure of this piece, it's simply beautiful. You have done a wonderful job on not only writting a good piece, but making something that is nice to look at as well. It is always a joy to read your work, this is no exception.

Richard

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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But it was your insane, angry words
that caused me the most pain
Just like the bruises left on my soul

I can really relate to these words.
You did a great job of expressing it and I hope it helped you with shaking those memories.
Nice work


Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A great flow and imagry....very well expressed!

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful flow to this.

Very well expressed.

I hope it all fades away....

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Execellent write! Thank you for sharing . debileah

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I felt every emotion Miss Victoria. It is always a pleasure to read your work, and very therapeutic. Well done!

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

You are
A fading piece of the past

This has a smooth flow to it. Time does cause bad memories to fade into the background.


Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done... you have quite a way with words... you know it is funny how sometimes the emotional scars hurt worse than the physical... they definately stay with you longer... you expressed your hurt and willingnesss to move past it so eloquently.

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Great flow and imagery!

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

nice read....

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Great piece! the imagery in this piece is awesome! Keep up the great work! Charley

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Victoria Lee~
Victoria Lee~

Phoenix, AZ



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