Fly

 

 

Soaring high above the clouds

Wind rushing through broken wings

Fly away from this stormy day

Fly to the sun

Circle the moon

Away from the darkness

And impending doom

Fly through shooting stars

Take a rest on Mars

Never look back

Never let them see you cry

Just fly

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

"Never let them see you cry
Just fly"

This is a great way to scream out, "I am me...and I am proud." Victoria, this is an empowering write. I think there are a lot of emotions hidden between the lines. Your presentation is gorgeous. Lydia

[T. L. O'Neal]

This is a wonderfully positive poem, you can wallow in self-pity or you can soar and fly. I'm glad you chose the latter. T

[Lori]

This is a great read -- very uplifting and pure.

[Pema Dorje]

Flying dreams and Poems are 'uplifting' where we feel we can soar above our worldly miseries and trade our plights for flights to heavens unseen ...

[*** Hey Jude***]

This is just beautiful, I can't tell you how many times I have felt this way. Glad to see you Bright Spirit back and Shining! ~ Jude

[The Elder Pine]

Its amazing! It really lifted my spirits reading this piece. I shall fly, and I shall never let anyone hold me down no matter what. As soon as I let it get to me theu have one. Thank you so much for sharing thos with me!

[TAYLOR]

this hit my heart...sorry vickie...i so truly am...i appologize for any hurt you might have felt here..i was totally out of line...i love everything about you ..especially your work..please forgive me for being...."stupid boy"....Taylor the brat

[Kelley Pascoe]

I have felt this way myself more than once. You express yourself so freely in this poem.
Well I hope you have come back to earth now and are in a better mood(smile)
Great write Victoria Lee. Thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost

[Forest Green]

Pretty neat the shape of it...looks a little bit feminine...;)

Special words come from special events and winning out in the end is one of the most special events of them all.

Thanks for the words, they're very inspiring.

FG

[a.a. harrison]

hey, nice write. the .gif animation is cool, too.

[Mark]

Beautiful words, V. Reminds me of the lines "... you said you were tired, then you went away. Up into the sky ..."

Something about soaring above our everyday problems and needless worries. You capture that.