Haunted

 

 

 

 

As you steal into my life.

The darkness meets the light.

Your shades of black and gray,

Cast shadows on the day.

Darkness, darkness, restless spirit.

Lost soul in the night.

Whose penance is to forever wander

on his woeful plight.



Time stands still when you appear.

Your ghostly image in the mirror.

Your silence conveying more than words could ever say,

as your apparition slowly,

fades away.



Darkness, darkness, restless spirit.

Lost soul in the night.

Where do you go? I do not know.

But it seems you've sold your soul.

I do not cry, as I say goodbye

I only wonder, why?

Reviews

[Rain]

Great title, because it's filled with so many haunting lines...Still it possesses a romantic lure. Great piece. Rain..

[*** Hey Jude***]

I really like the message that you convey with this strong piece. The images that you share draw me from line to line as they flow with truth! Great work ~ Jude :-) xoxo

[BrightEyes]

on first read here....I interpret this almost as if you are speaking to your own reflection...trying to calm your own restless soul...wondering where the essence of you has fled. a self-haunting if you will...where circumstances have made you crawl within yourself....until you've gotten lost inside....and are trying yet to break free once more. Might be way off here...but it is where it sent me.

*hugs*
laura