My Mom :)

Its all about love and care. I got since my birth. Love you Maa :)

She's Unique

She's True

She's intense

Which I always knew.

 

All her notions are for me

But this isn't came at ones to thee

She kept all struggling since the day I was born

She looks up and thank to that almighty god.

 

I call her mom/maa/mother

Thy call them by her name

She always been there

When I called her name

 

I have some sharp memories about her love

She fed me her milk, but I tasted it as pure love

She hugged me when I was ill

She worries

When sometimes I cry and avoid my pills.

 

She's my mother

She's superstar

She always know what I want

She's just next or my only god.

 

Love you Maa.....

Author's Note

Just avoid my mistakes, I wrote this in 2 mins. Have to be fast because have to share this to my mother and my wife :)

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

very nice poem tribute to mother! so lovely gentle and written with passion, your mother should be proud of you...Everyone who respect his own parents -mother and father - surely will have respect to all humans too. Great lines :
I have some sharp memories about her love
She fed me her milk, but I tasted it as pure love

-nour-
June-013

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Sugar :) Much appreciated :)

Singh ;)

[PP]

A very nice heartfelt tribute..A true man is one who respects ladies in my opinion :) You are lucky to have 2 by your side :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Hehehehe thanks Prathama :)

Cheers!!
Singh :)

[PP]

My pleasure :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Pleasure is mine :)

[PP]

:)

[Vikrantsingh]

:D

[smilempsn]

I would like to make that count to '3' instead.. correct Vikrantsingh Parmar :)

[Vikrantsingh]

? I'm puzzled :S

[smilempsn]

:P 'Dia' yeeddaa :P

[Vikrantsingh]

Oh yes :P

[Mehul Rwat]

A definite tribute o' love, that u have towards your mother. Well done; giving definite shape to your feelings towards someone or something and still make poetic sense is sometimes hard to manage, but you seem to be going on well. There's much upon which you can improve though. And I hope you will!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Mehul

[Mehul Rwat]

Anytime Vikrant. :D

[Vikrantsingh]

;)

[Baby Ricochet]

A beautiful tribute to your mother. Great work

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Ricochet

Cheers!!
Singh:)

[Angi]

What a beautiful tribute to your mom. She must have felt so loved when she read it!

[Vikrantsingh]

Ta Angi, ya she loved it.
I loved your review and expression of share towards my poem :)

Cheers!!
Singh :)

[Sarmelendez]

very beautiful

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much dear :)
I hope you will find my other poems too worth reading :)

read moreThank you so much dear :)
I hope you will find my other poems too worth reading :)

Cheers!!
Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

A great dedication to her...Well penned...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Sami :)
I really cherish when poets appreciate my work which is again a new achievement for me.

Cheers!!
Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you Sami :).. Just checking your art and excellence :)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Vikrantsingh]

:D

[Sami Khalil]

:)

[Vikrantsingh]

:P

[Sami Khalil]

:)

[Vikrantsingh]

:3

[Frieda P]

What a lovely tribute to your maa... :-)

'She fed me her milk, but I tasted it as pure love'

So very sweet indeed.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks a lot for your kind words - Frieda :)

Much Appreciated :)

Cheers!!
Singh

[Vikrantsingh]

Mother's Are Melody, Tune, Rhyme To My Life, They Are Volatile, They Are Hyper/Angst, They Are Words To My Song & Life ♥

- Added more lines to this poem lately

[smilempsn]

^-^

[Vikrantsingh]

:)

[John A Raju]

a good tribute to ur mom, i also wrote a poem on my mom, pls review if u get time vikrant

[Vikrantsingh]

It would be my pleasure to read some more lines on mother,
She's endless topic to write :)
read moreIt would be my pleasure to read some more lines on mother,
She's endless topic to write :)
Was planning to write story on her. Don't have time to.
Give me sometime I would love to read you poem
Mate :)

Cheers!!
Vikrantsingh Parmar.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Very nice tribute to your mother. And not bad for a 2 min poem =)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks :) Lori - Much Appreciated :)