Bold Strategies

Burning temptation, 

an innocent sigh.

Fighting fixation, 

hating to try. 

I shall take a bite of you,

and you a bite of me. 

Drowning in our ecstasy,

Desire setting us free. 

Time and time again, 

Pretty, pretty lies. 

Words unspoken but known, 

Staring into your eyes. 

Forget about the world with me, 

don't think about our sin.

reach for me in blackened rooms, 

entwine me in your skin. 

A subtle stare,

flicks of the eyes. 

taunting to dare, 

and innocence dies. 

Reviews

[Caradoc]

Ooo...I like this one. Very erotic and enticing. Makes me want to spend some time in the Elseness and just have a long, languid dip in the desires and fantasies of someone I used to talk to there. I bet that bite would be very, very sweet.

I must say, Dew, you are not too shabby when it comes to erotic pieces. In fact a lot of your poems have sensual undertones. That makes me peg you as a passionate, sensual soul. You need to get some of this published.

-Cara

[John Fitzgerald]

god this is very erotic and somewhat lovely. it reveals a tender soul, one that when tempted is not afraid to discover. beautiful :)

[Dewella~Vintella]

Thank you so much for your review, what you described is what I was going for. ^^

~Vin

[John Fitzgerald]

that's excellent to know :)