The Forgotten Truth

Another poem consisting of two lists of words.

Critical teeth hang over your face in a smile its breath like that of a dog scorching your skin,
Invading your mind it sucks you into a bottle of soft darkness.
Enchanted like that of a moth to a fire you stop fighting,
a caress like roses you sigh and like a mouse in a maze you fight to win.

Whispering draws you further a person of sweet words you hold dear,
this way and that the world ablaze with the many glories of a ruler.
The passionate realm a cup made of the finest glasses filled with the sweetest temptations,
You seek for forgiveness wherever you look and through a window the answer is clear.

You cant survive outside with your broken mind,
Only the darkness can sooth each chip off your shoulder leaving you emotionally blind.

Author's Note

I did this with the help of LivingDeath....an some blonde girl. XD

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nice collab. Very cool indeed.

[LivingDeath]

Yeah I'm gonna say you beat me on this one. This is amazing. If I didnt know you wrote this having to use those 20 words, I wouldnt of known at all. You made it flow together perfectly. I really liked this piece :)
~LivingDeath