This Is Rated R For Nudies And S**t Talking. (You're less flawless from this angle)

This Is Rated R For Nudies And S**t Talking. (You're less flawless from this angle)

A Poem by Eden

oh the things i could say about you
if only i had the heart
one day i will
and my god will i tear you apart
there's no more sadness, no i'm not crying no more
it's all total anger and you're the one you can thank it for
those lyrics you steal from people with real skills
only shows your ignorance in lines
go ahead and play the girl with beautiful messes of all kinds
i know you better than you know you
isn't it sad to finally hear what's true
i know you better than you know you
and it's getting harder and harder to breathe when i'm around you...

 
oh isn't this a fucked up mess
watching you lead yourself into a life like this
and oh how i used to hold you so high
now you're being drug off your very own throne
apparently i mentioned i love you but i can't remember why
all i can recall is the ascending sound of your moan
i know you better than you know you
isn't it sad to finally hear what's true
i know you better than you know you
and it's getting harder and harder to breathe when i'm with you...

 
call the number, 911 we have a problem
the girls done lost it
this girls done lost it
i'm not sure if she's gonna' make it
she can't keep up with these games
that she's gambling with her own mind
her list gets longer as she keeps taking names
lord, i don't know if i can save her this time
baby, i'm sorry i said those things i didn't mean
i know they sound terrible but they're not as bad as they seem
now here's a question for you
do i mean it or is my mind two steps ahead of yours
now you're sitting in clockwork, a twilight zone if you will
whos really playing who, "oh what the f**k ever"
go ahead and take your f*****g pills
i know you better than you know you
isn't it sad to finally hear what's true
i know you better than you know you
and it's getting harder and harder to breathe when i'm with you...

 
oh you're still beautiful
but tell me baby, when did you lose your spark?
you used to be so different, so unique
now you can't even make your mark
unless we're talking makers mark
or tvarsky, your breath always tastes like this
cheap cigarettes and alcohol, what a beautiful mix
so you never loved me
but you let me waste all this f*****g time on you
i know you're a damn liar but if you want to convince yourself
i'll leave you be
at least i have the guts to tell you the truth
even if it is in the lines of a song
i'm done cleaning your messes
you can clean this up when i'm gone
i know you better than you know you
isn't it sad to finally hear what's true
i know you better than you know you
and it's getting harder and harder to breathe when i'm with you...
 

i know you better
i know you better
i know you better than
isn't it sad
that i know you better
and it's getting harder
it's getting harder and harder to breathe when
i know you better than you know you...

 
and it's getting harder and harder to breathe when i'm with you.

© 2010 Eden


Author's Note

Eden
ignore grammar

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Wow. Powerful, angry, passionate. You can feel the words...you don't even have to read them, they absorb into my bloodstream by running my fingers across the screen. Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


beautiful poem I felt it right to my heart - i want to encourage you to keep on writing

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 6, 2009
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Eden
Eden

Winchester, KY



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