Spasms

I want to discover you
explore you
f**k you mentally
erupting your passion

Having your body weaken
with strong thoughts

Cause I got poetry
dripping spasms
as my lips quiver

And anything you desired
I was ready to give

I look up with a devious smile
while rubbing the tip
of the pen across
my ink covered lips

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

eh needs work

pic is me

Reviews

[Lemonhead]

Not bad, your poetry is certainly raw and honest. I like that. Keep rubbing the tip and something good will come eventually...

[Kenneth The Poet]

Love it. Need more be said.

[ATG]

Definitely a suggestive, but interesting piece. And I think it is fine the way it is.

[Jibey]

'f**k you mentally'... yessss.... spent on spasms

[The Nude Writer]

Work on it as you see fit, but I think you have written another winner :)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

haha thanks