Ravenous

Every time I think of you
and I must admit I often do

Its feels like sweet
delicious torture
to a ravenous heart

I want to hear
everything

Your heart

Your moans

Your sensitivities

Cause I love you

And my body is restless
aching for just one
taste of you

Its sweet delicious torture
to a ravenous heart

And I cant help but
masturbate to the thought of you

Teasing digits knead in
pleasing patterns
tactile sensitivities
as I write your
name on my c**t

~S T E V E~

Sweet convulsions
body spasms

P***y spelling out
F**K ME HARDER
still lipping syllables
of just how much more
you could penetrate me
even farther

Its sweet
delicious
torture

To a
ravenous
heart

Cause I want raw
aching bone against bone
exploring the exposed naked
poetry of our universe

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Very explicit erotica, smoothly penned with teasing digits lol

["writing by" KS]

Sexy and sensual. I would make it a mature rating though.made me smile. Thank you :)

[PossiblyAlice]

very good imagery, you definitely got your point across

[B-poet]

A new defined aura of erotic poetry. Backed with powerful imagery and impactful diction to paint a perfect picture of ecstasy beyond belief. Nice job. :)

[Petrichor]

I think my eyes are hot to the touch, now... ouch. Erotic, in a clever, cerebral way. Nice.

[BL]

I get the message loud and clear and so will Dustin too, this is highly charged, erotic and raw

[Annabelle-adonna]

Wow... this is amazing. This 'friend' Dustin is a hell of a lucky guy ;). You convey your feelings for him very well. Sexual desire, but maybe something more than that too? I find these sorts of feelings very difficult to get across in writing, but you nail it. I especially like "Its sweet delicious torture to a ravenous heart".

Sensual and arousing, and I also really like your poetic style:
"Cause I want raw
aching bone against bone
exploring the exposed naked
poetry of our universe"
I love it. Love everything about it. If I had to improve it somehow, I'd consider changing the word 'masturbate' and putting something maybe more subtle, like implying it instead of being literal?

- Love, Annabelle

[Rob Santana]

Damn brutal. I like it.

[Aristede Craig Jr]

Woo vice

[Will]

Very nice flow, and definitely captivating. The way you write sensually and sexually without being horribly smutty is excellent, and I look forward to more of your work.