Quiet Phase

My life
has been
a quiet phase

It's like
I'm bursting
at the seams

I hope you
rip me open

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Direct and honest words in the poem. I like when the whispers of someone offer a opportunity to dance in the desire of love and great need. A very good use of words. You made your point. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[The 13th Eros]

What a passionate, powerful glimpse into your soul. Your shell is ripped away leaving a new, vibrant life within.

[Jibey]

I am having the same phase too!! 'Rip' is violent and powerful... and after long abstinence the urge is overwhelming when the opportunity presents itself... wild and wilful...total abandonment... lust unleashed

[B-poet]

Very intriguing and emotionally profound. Kinda feels like some tension from within needs to be released after reading this. You've conveyed your message in a unique and astounding way. Great job. :)

[Kenilo Kent]

This came out soo naturally... Love love love

[BL]

The design of you is such that reaction with another will create a violent chemical reaction I take it. I can imagine you as a firework waiting to go off and what a pretty display you will make.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

thanks

[Will]

I love the simplicity. Most of us writers dont know how to use just a few words to get our message across; we tend to use a hundred when a couple will do. For that very reason, I love this piece very much. S much powerful emotion in just a few short lines. Wonderfully done.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

did you mean "It's Like/ I'm bursting"?

this is so much said in so few words...i have been waiting for that someone to pull me out of my shell...ask me to dance, get these feet and this heart flying...

you could be the one to do that...quiet can be peaceful...but so uneventful...


it is time to really live.


good piece.