Delicious Delirious Death

Masturbation
for me is like
forced orgasms
self torture
delicious
delirious
death

Cause I keep cumming
and cumming and cumming
till my legs go stiff

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Will]

I find that your works are always short, but always pack a powerful punch in such a shirt time. I like this one, I really do. The alliteration is great, rhyming fantastic, and who doesn't like masturbating? Haha, but aside from the humor, this was a great piece, and certainly thought provoking. Nice work :)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Good read and write.

[BL]

That's fine just turn up the music and go for it, "la la la la LA....LAAA" everyone's at it. It can cause blindness though

[BryanaBear]

Very intimately written

[B-poet]

Instant gratification defined as an orgasm in it's highest regards to reaching a coveted plateau to where only the death of conscious thinking is real because the sensations of passion and pleasure make it take a back seat within the heat of the moment. Very interesting, intriguing and entertaining. Nice job. :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Boom! Boom! Boom!

[Relic]

Six times? wow. You're quite the erotic writer and...rubber? ha

[The 13th Eros]

You stir and stun and senses in your dark, sensual reflections. Sometimes those ripples can leave deep, delicious marks that seem as real a taste as softest skin. What a sweet drug at times to ease away the world. xx

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

hehe wow thank you ... I was shy to post this but I guess I have no shame but I wont share the link to my facebook lol

[The 13th Eros]

lol.. I can understand that! Yes it is such a beautiful escape.. a release when the world weighs us down.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I do it like 6 times a day lol

[The 13th Eros]

Smiling... I must take it up a notch! :D

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

haha