Inky Lips

I am inky lips
and quill for a tongue
one kiss from me
and you'll cum
words

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[kookoobananas]

this is amazing! great use of eroticism without being too much. This is a simple poem I would loved to read over and over

[Jibey]

One kiss from you and I'll explode... not just with words :-) Then you could give me a mouthful lol

[Baby Ricochet]

HA! Good one

[Hold-B-Run-Faster]

Simple, poignant, brilliant. I was going to ask if you've spoken to The Nude Writer yet, but it seems you've already peeked her interests. Her comment, one that I wholly agree with; collect the poems, put 'em in a book, and you'll out sell Shades of Grey in a week. Not that to say that Shades of Grey is a work of art, nor to say that your work is on par with Shades of Grey, its just simply better and it'd be nice to see someone who knows how to write dethrone the crap that's on the rack right now. Keep up the good wood... er... work.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

wow you just blew my mind with that review and I'm speechless

Ive never even read 50 shades of grey ... I perfur my stuff lol

[Hold-B-Run-Faster]

Yeah don't read 50 shades of grey. I tried to read it out loud one time as a gag poetry reading, but I couldnt stop laughing. It is not just bad content wise, it is technically bad as something written in English. Your stuff, no pun intended, blows that book away. Go find a publisher.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

woooooooooow

[KeeD]

You might have just found the cure to any man's writers block and also a way to rush blood to his co.."winks"

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

hehe lol much thanks

[The 13th Eros]

Erotic ecstasy flows through your words... And you know full well that passion begins in the mind... with thoughts and words... and then, and only then does it ripple in waves across the body in sighs and screams. xx

[The Nude Writer]

Where do these come from? They really are amazing.
Collect them and make an erotic poetry book. Please! =D

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the short and direct poetry. A writer with great skill can make 17 words have life and purpose. You did. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Will]

Wow... I mean... Just wow. This has to be my favorite one of yours, Samantha. Brilliant. Keep up the great work.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Thank you Will

It seems poetry has possessed me of late and even now I cant seep for need to write

[Will]

You have been accumulating a lot of poetry lately, all of it very good. And what is this sleep you speak of? Writers don't run on sleep; we run on words.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Indeed, and thanks

that could be turned into a poem... you should try to expand on that thought "Writers don't run on sleep; we run on words"

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

fueled by desire and inspiration

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

our ZZZZ's birth creation

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

dang lol i kinda just ran with that

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Writers don't run on sleep we run on words
fueled by desire and inspiration
our ZZZZ's birth creation

I really like that

[Will]

That was great!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

lol thanks

[WideEyedAbyss]

i really like this. one of the best lines i have read