Mute

With poetry
I am born
into a new
existence

Words be
the spark
that ignites
my soul

But anytime
you speak
from a place
that is not
your heart
you are
mute
to
me

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[John A Raju]

short but an excellent point portrayed so aesthetically, good work

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

I agree one hundred percent with this, this is beautifully written and I love this piece a lot1 Great write, as I always say don't tell me lies if its from the heart and you mean it then talk to me!!!

[Frieda P]

Hear hear, I so agree, powerful sentiment in this short read.

[Viccy Rogers]

I like how it is so short - gets the message across and makes it seem more important! Great vocabulary, love it:)

[Vannessa Monroe]

very bold, and i love the direct flow by centering the poem, adored it-

[B-poet]

This a very captivating and distinguished poem. Great job of displaying intrinsic penmanship in regards to this masterpiece of yours here. :)

[chaotic katie]

beautifully written!

[BL]

A nice body of words that make their point well.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You do have a knack of capturing a concept or feeling in a few words that flow smoothly. This has a bitter/sweet feel to it.