Poetic Lips

Stealing kisses
in secret places
as our eyes meet
and souls pressed on
as hungry lips grew
taunt at the notion
of tasting a souls
true passion



By Samantha Pruitt

Reviews

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

My favorite part of this is the notion of lips taunting. The best kisses are the ones that can be playful and taunting. Lips grow hungry when passion is there for the tasting. I like little poetic gems like this. If I can suggest anything then I wonder about the placement of the word "grew." Is it attached to the next line or is it referring to the growing hungry. I don't know why but I feel it stands out a little bit. "As lips grew hungry" is not as poetic though, so I get that. I really like the first four lines and the ending...but something feels slightly uneven in the middle. Just my take on it...

[wordman]

sweet ,stealing kisses in secret places
thanks for the request I need all I can get lol
Ron

[Trace]

Yes, YES. I understand completely.

Perfect picture to punctuate the poem. Trace

[Charisma]

As always a beautiful poem from a like mind. As your poetry makes a true statement from the heart. Always a touching moment when true passion drips from our pens. And the true meaning of words come from the heart.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good of words. Create nice visions and thoughts. It is good to steal kisses in secret places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sami Khalil]

You can taste the passion in this poem...Bravo...........