Premature Ending

Bleed your
worth to me
in vintage fields
of cotton and silk
that bloom verses

As night descends
the darkness bends
around your troubled mind
tugging at the strings
of a heart tied tight
to pen and pain

Bound to a premature ending
your drowning in your own mind
I can see all the truth your bending
your afraid of the secrets I will find

Why be so scared

Why hide who you are

Why cover your flaws

Cause I want to love
the broken parts of you

Come out of your darkness
come out of that lonely void
and let me love all of you

I see the scars
that vandalize
your skin

I'm not blind
to the pain you feel

Tis a great desire
of human beings

When both burn
fully entwined

Be it that I found love
drowned in lies and heart ache

A passion upon pain
that I bloomed from

But

The tales of
your choice
converting in a dance
beneath a deceitful love
with devil breaths

As angels cry

Poet your quill violates
the wings hidden by shadows
the angel does weep
behind the clouds

Before the past
could endure
their pain

Love was
renewed
restored

More

Just so f*****g
much more

The darkness
chases us all
turning this
imagination
into words
only we
would
know

There they are
haunting and dark
blood dripping from their
indentations on the page of hearts

I want your real heart
the one that hides behind
the deceitful dark decaying
beating abyss inside of your chest

Those words I said
those words you wrote

Are but mere reflections of echoes
of a love so true even Edgar Allen Poe and Annabell Lee
could never dissever my soul from your soul

Even when pen and pain
send tendrils of ink
to probe my
darkest
fear

That the sea inside of me
will never drown
your demons
down under

And love
and pen
both

Run dry



By Samantha Pruitt

Reviews

[Inda]

This is fantastic, so much expressed here, such a longing to love the other who cannot open up entirely out of shame or guilt or fear and to see the power of the voice that says, it's ok, i don't mind those rough edges, in fact i understand they are part of you and so i love them too. That is what this pice reflects more than anything, that love that is bigger than even your love of poetry or literature. Fantastic job!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Much thanks I don't even know if he gets that but I'm patient and I have wrote a poem about loving him more than any words that flow out of my pen I love him enough to sacrifice my own happiness just for his like our car broke down last night and we had bought concert tickets to see Alice in Chains this Saturday He loves them and I have never in my life been to a concert he has been to many anyway I told him to ask around on facebook if anyone wanted to go with him so they would drive and he could go and have fun while I sat at home alone with our 4 month old with no phone or tv I don't know if he even gets what I was willing to do for him but we get to go after all so :) I'm happy if he is happy and I love him more than he could ever imagine

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

How stupid are you why would anyone make fake pages to discredit me who best to answer than than you who are the only one doing so I am a mother to a 16 month old as you well know as if I have time to waste on fake a*s pages I barley have time to post any of my work on here let alone create mass fake pages .... So in your eyes anyone and everyone who has stood up for me is a fake your so funny Charlie the site mod and owner of wc has all the proof he needs that all my work is all mine and so is my husbands the fact that we are still here proves that more than anything I could ever say

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

You can claim temporary all you want fact is it was not and I have not taken any of my work down what so ever and I never will remove any of MY work

You should know I have contacted Charlie via FB and you will be banned

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

and keep sending me mass messages Ill not read a one

[Astro]

Undeniable

[Inda]

you have my support! These messages are super annoying.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Yes they sure are I only replied to a few but there were like 50 not counting the private messages he sends

I don't want this bs clogging up the news feed

Thank you for your support but as I have warned others if this guy sees that your standing up for me in anyway he will start to harass you he will slander and try to discredit you even call you a plagiarizer and say you are a fake page that I or wordman have created than the messages will start

I got into this mess for standing up for my husband and than wordman stood up for the both of us and you see the mess he is in ... So please be careful block block block is all we can do but even than its no help

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

How funny got 2 different people saying I stole this from them lol well ok than that makes a lot of sense

[blue angel]

"Poet your quill violates
the wings hidden by shadows
the angel does weep
behind the clouds" ... Would you like to know the depth of my concept with this stanza? Where and how it came to be? It goes deeper than the mere words you were compelled to. The poet I wrote this stanza for is infused within it. My craft is embedded mementos that you are unaware of, and I wrote this poem long before I posted it, btw. So, dates mean zip to me. Bleed Your Worth to Me (my base concept)also derived from a personal reflection. You may or may not be aware but I hosted a competition entitled, bleed your worth to me, based on my poem, and the concept that I created. I honestly feel your poem was stronger without the additions. The inspiration is quite evident throughout. The dance also derived form a co-write that I wrote with a well known fellow poet. Surely you realize the depths put into crafting poetry, it's not just words on a page that sound good. It is our internal fingerprint. You can't mask it, oddly you have my real name in the first stanza to boot, I'm not here to burn you at the stake. No one is perfect, and I do hope you are woman enough to face the truth. It's the only way to free yourself from this affliction. I'm not going away, and I will not be intimidated. Don't disappoint me. Remove my lines to better yourself, and learn from it. See you didn't realize the internet could be so intimate. Your husband will most likely agree in utter confidence.-- The right move to make. - blue angel

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I am so sick of being cyberstalked by the same insane man .... Move on TKlittle or who ever the hell you are I can prove this is my poem just cause I post an olde poem here does not mean that I dont have it on my other site and in my blob to boot

[Jetta Zippora]

The intensity of your words is touching and gratifying to read. I am feeling every emotion brought forth by your pen. Very well expressed.

[Night]

This was an incredible work of art......it,s not easy to keep the moment fresh with a longish write as this...you've done it superbly here.....well done my friend....I liked this one =)

[Akshay Rawal]

Hi ! There are very few writers, who see through 'love' in much an immaterial and moral manner. It feels good to read such write-stuff. Thanks for sharing.