F**k me in Verses

wrote this back in 2007 it was posted back when a lot of poems were lost on this site :(

Touch me in verses
In lines,
breaks and spaces
In every comma
dots and dashes,
Think of me
in my barest
Then feel me deeply
with your mind
and senses...
Love me in verses
In haiku's,
quatrains
or sonnets
With a pen
and a sheet of paper
Open up
your mind,
heart
and soul
Something you've
never really
done before...
Or why don't you just
kiss me in verses?
Talk dirty to me
in free verses
or old fashion
prose
With your mind,
I want you to explore
what's in between
my legs
in an iambic
pentameter
Do it good,
then you'll have me
rushing to your bed
after...

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

I was searching for proof the poem is mine and woohooo I found some

FURTHER PROOF THE POEM IS MINE AND PROVES I POSTED IT ON MELO IN 2007 AND I DID NOT EDIT IT IN

SO FUCK OFF CRAZY STALKERS

fallow this link it will prove its mine
http://www.melodramatic.com/node/5378349

poetrygirl posted it on Thu.09.17.09 12:55pm

thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviews

[caustic]

I've helped tidalnymph a lot with her writing over the last year and the original post of this was even more broken than this version. (she originally posted: in every commaS, dotS and dashES? SYNTAX inconsistency people... Ohioans don't f*****g talk like that. Believe me, I know.) Her syntax is definitive because English is not her first language, which is obvious here even with the incomplete edit WE did on it. This was her most popular poem with over a thousand views in a short time. Samantha was a member of DUP for quite a while and was fully exposed to that poem for ages. Why didn't she ever mention that it was plagiarized from her? She saw it every time someone commented on it, someone from her own username commented on the poem, she had full access to it as a member for a month at the very least; why did she never speak up? She took the blatantly original opener for one of jestalessa's poems and used it as the opener of one of her newly written ones. When confronted she denied it until she was shown (publicly) the poem by jestalessa, then admitted she might have taken it. jesta actually told Samantha she could have the line and decided to rewrite her own poem altogether. Samantha was also confronted (even by PierreTheMad whom she did get some permissions from) several times for not giving credit on untouched lines and ideas she had taken repeatedly from other members of DU. Rant over. I hope there is some justice here.

[Amy Marie]

A poem that keeps you going from the title to the very end.

[Frankie Nguyen]

very nice

[Shardbearer99]

Hey that was a nicely put together piece of potery. Fun, erotic and pleasing to read.

[Art]

creative ....even with exoticness we can reach beyond the climatic adventures of the mind...nicely done...

[MuSe Ampoule]

very raw and powerful use of words, clever twists and turns and wonderful word plays. great job!

Thanks to Linear for sharing!

[InkSlinger]

Shaking my head in agreement with my fellow reviewers.. luscious, tasty, dirty and raw.. love the clever tangle between words and sex. Metaphoric perfection..

[Hollow Man]

Yes mam, haha. This was fantastic and sexy. 'F**k me in verses' baby. haha. Very witty and well written. Thanks

kgs

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is better then outstanding. You took me on a good ride in your words. This is what poetry need to be. Alive and filled with spirit. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[OT]

hahaha this is brilliant!!!! very clever - and I laughed!! clever and witty!!! (thanks to linear for RR)

[Linear]

Well er er ok I liked it, plain and frank maybe a little shocking, but so very well written, I realise I shouldn't be here but I just had to look