Young Love

Young Love

A Story by Jason Toomey

A nice girl meets a nice guy

The get to talking and stuff

The begin to feel each other and guess what Christmas is coming up

So he bought her a necklace and she bought him some chucks

They start kissing they're past the hugs

They're also past ”like like” they're falling in love

Time flies by and it’s been about 10 months

The guy has a job now and he works late nights, he comes home tired complaining that the hours are rough

But she thinks he’s up to something and calls him on his bluff

He gets offended and lashes out screaming ”ENOUGH IS ENOUGH”

He said ”I can't do this anymore we've been together for almost a year, and you begin to lose trust? Because I’m working too much!”

She said something she didn't mean but it slipped because she was scared so she said “let’s just break up”

He's shocked and stunned

She quickly said ”I didn't mea...” He cut her off and said “its whatever I don't give a f**k”

He storms out and slams the door shut

Both have broken heats yet there’s no blood

She stands motionless in front if the for wondering what she just done

Both will never look at love the same, she turns heartless and his heart turns stone tough

Both are monsters never faithful living selfish and lonely, longing for each other yet wishing that they never fell in love

© 2013 Jason Toomey


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Added on August 4, 2013
Last Updated on August 4, 2013
Tags: love, lust

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Jason Toomey
Jason Toomey

Philadelphia, PA



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I'm 18 I love writing and reading poetry I also rap and dace more..

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