People rush life these days.. they rarely stand and stare: little or no time for that. We or many, rarely notice what precious jewels there are around us everywhere, whether or not we pause. Specks, atoms, amoebic would-be's - given the chance. Your expansive thoughts should be offered to every doubtful mind or/and gifted to every heart.
' What went wrong?
Did we forget to tell him
that blood is red, or that
those Sunflowers over there,
like captured stars,
are beyond anything
he can acquire?
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Emma,
You know, I think we are so sensory overloaded, we cannot see beauty anymore, but it i.. read moreEmma,
You know, I think we are so sensory overloaded, we cannot see beauty anymore, but it is worse than that, as a culture, we have lost all sense of wonder. Just look around, where is the JOY? It's not in having a good time at a concert or a party, that's just fun. Joy? I don't know...
Perhaps it's best to look for the positives in the all around? It isn't always easy - true, but .. read morePerhaps it's best to look for the positives in the all around? It isn't always easy - true, but the word
sounds more musical than negativity , don't you
think?
1 Year Ago
Emma,
It is always the human thing to look at the dark sides of things. As poets, we see thi.. read moreEmma,
It is always the human thing to look at the dark sides of things. As poets, we see things that need attention because they are unjust, or destructive, or even pointless, and feel we must set them right, but we do the same with beauty, we have to! We have to because, as you say, rush life so we want to slam on the brakes, screech to a stop, and yell... "Would you look at that?!" because we just can't stand letting beauty pass unremarked.
Vol
1 Year Ago
Of course never ignore the dark and negative but.. one can drown in them,. which is why one needs .. read moreOf course never ignore the dark and negative but.. one can drown in them,. which is why one needs them as rafts when needs them, perhaps.
Wishing you both a more than happy weekend.
People rush life these days.. they rarely stand and stare: little or no time for that. We or many, rarely notice what precious jewels there are around us everywhere, whether or not we pause. Specks, atoms, amoebic would-be's - given the chance. Your expansive thoughts should be offered to every doubtful mind or/and gifted to every heart.
' What went wrong?
Did we forget to tell him
that blood is red, or that
those Sunflowers over there,
like captured stars,
are beyond anything
he can acquire?
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
Emma,
You know, I think we are so sensory overloaded, we cannot see beauty anymore, but it i.. read moreEmma,
You know, I think we are so sensory overloaded, we cannot see beauty anymore, but it is worse than that, as a culture, we have lost all sense of wonder. Just look around, where is the JOY? It's not in having a good time at a concert or a party, that's just fun. Joy? I don't know...
Perhaps it's best to look for the positives in the all around? It isn't always easy - true, but .. read morePerhaps it's best to look for the positives in the all around? It isn't always easy - true, but the word
sounds more musical than negativity , don't you
think?
1 Year Ago
Emma,
It is always the human thing to look at the dark sides of things. As poets, we see thi.. read moreEmma,
It is always the human thing to look at the dark sides of things. As poets, we see things that need attention because they are unjust, or destructive, or even pointless, and feel we must set them right, but we do the same with beauty, we have to! We have to because, as you say, rush life so we want to slam on the brakes, screech to a stop, and yell... "Would you look at that?!" because we just can't stand letting beauty pass unremarked.
Vol
1 Year Ago
Of course never ignore the dark and negative but.. one can drown in them,. which is why one needs .. read moreOf course never ignore the dark and negative but.. one can drown in them,. which is why one needs them as rafts when needs them, perhaps.
Wishing you both a more than happy weekend.
While I not so saddened as to think we are the last literate generation, I can share a great deal of the dread you pose in this poem Vol. For I do fear we may be the last generation not consumed by the placing of an artificial value on everything, and subsequently of finding worth only in what we can somehow monetize.
ken
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Ken, I do believe we are the last "liberal arts" generation.I retired from teaching creative writing.. read moreKen, I do believe we are the last "liberal arts" generation.I retired from teaching creative writing and English and American literature over ten years ago. From what I've seen, I know there is no literary movement, or school, or segment of society that values literature anymore. Name one instantly recognizable to everyone poet alive today, one great artist, one literary novelist, one great composer, one great architect. There were som from each of those genres alive and famous in my lifetime. I wish it were not true, but, look around...
Vol
My name is Vol Lindsey. I live in Gouge Eye, Texas, a tiny ghost town on Rt. 66.
I am a retired creative writing, English literature teacher. I have been writing poetry and reading publicly since 196.. more..