Secret Love

Secret Love

A Poem by JJ

Someone I love



written for Gavin.


                  Someone I love deeply

                                 Is someone who dose'nt know.

                                 How my love for them flows

                                 in the air

                                 it's just not fair,

                                 for me to love them,

                                 but they just don't care.

                                 My life is slow

                                 and myself- esteem is so,so low.

                                 Maybe they will know

                                  its for real

                                   and just how I feel.

                                  But he's so far away.

                                  And I dont know the way

                                 I know I'm right.

                                  But will I be alright?

                                  That I tell him how I feel.

                                   Can this be for real?



© 2009 JJ

Author's Note

This is a true poem.

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How can he react to you when all you did was hacked him in the first place b***h? This profile doesn't belong to you. It was my boyfriend's and you deleted everything from his true profile. You're sick b*****d.

Posted 12 Years Ago

3 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Wow. I think I know how you feel. Its like you want to tell him but you dont know how he's going to react and how your going to feel after you tell him. Great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on July 1, 2009



Houma, LA

I love to write poetry, and was voted the best poet out of my whole school in a contest. And I love to play the guitar. MyHotComments more..