Television Waves

Television Waves

A Poem by The Twin Arenas
"

if it bothers you, throw a shirt over it.

"
It doesn't matter
how close to paradise
you've made your hole,
if you leave your tv 
to play in the snow
swimmers will think you mad,
and maybe you are 

but then you'll remember
the sleep machine at a fancy hotel
in Toronto, and how the 
waves of the ocean sounded
just like channel three

© 2014 The Twin Arenas


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Ah ha, artificial tranquility!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Reminds me of the time I punched a squirrel right in the nuts.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Yea.. I could always relax next to the waves but falling asleep always took longer than the cars and people passing by my window in New York.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Twin Arenas

9 Years Ago

same diff.
This was definitely a good depth in perception.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Twin Arenas

9 Years Ago

thanks, I think.
I've never been a fan of those sleep machines, but somehow the late night tv has me snoozing every time!
:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Twin Arenas

9 Years Ago

thanks for the read.
Wow, this I have read twice, beautifully powerful, sheer impact :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Twin Arenas

9 Years Ago

thanks man
I have one of those. It makes like 20 different sounds, curiously one of these is entitled "white noise", the static of the off kilter tv channel you refer to. My favorite they call ''sea shore'', it's not the rolling surf (that's another one) but more the sounds you might hear on the shore of a gentle protected bay.
Anyway, I liked this piece, Conda, the tone of it...

and thanks for the Otis clip, still listening to it.


DPaz

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Twin Arenas

9 Years Ago

curiouser and curiouser.
Ever since I saw Poltergeist TV snow freaks me out

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sleep machine, eh? What hotel is this? I think you have a whole lot of people scratching their heads about Canadians, I will give you that.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Twin Arenas

9 Years Ago

yeah, like a sleep machine, y'know? thanks for the read, KL.
oh, you have gotta way with letters.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Twin Arenas

9 Years Ago

thanks. i kind of like this one.

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Added on October 12, 2014
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