Corduroy

what is this.

some people
when they walk
it sounds good
and is remembered
like a song

on a good day
I'll almost fall in
love with someone
a little uglier than you
were

Reviews

[KWP]

hahaha - I can't tell if this is mocking the ugly one or a desperate attempt to fall out of love - in any case if you are searching for the ugly when you are only surrounded by love - well things are gonna complicate - instead you should perhaps look for some black leather purely because of the noise it makes when thighs are rubbed together X

[Rene Salinas]

This to me the falling in love with an older men. I 'm even going to venture to say that he wore brown ones a little worn out at the knees. The question is : What would anyone see on him? If attraction only had eyes it would be an easy answer but it isn't. What, How does that really happen hey? Attraction of different polarities? I would blame it on the static of the corduroy's can be a powerful thing.

Thank you.

[The Twin Arenas]

hahaha!!!!

[Chris]

a larger story in a few words. i think these sort of writings, they're excellent.
at times it seems like you might be mining for something in general,
and you find these strings of cohesion.
this one sort of shows how the subjective experience
influences our daily life.
great one.