Exposed for you

Exposed for you

A Poem by WaitForBetter

As I exposed myself to the glare in your eye, I realise that this is not something for me to do
Don't confuse yourself I do know that this isn't something to bargain about
But please don't desert me like this. 
I feel the sun on my skin
And the breath of your mouth on my neck. 
Let me live just a little longer and I shall do you no harm

© 2012 WaitForBetter


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A interesting poem. A lot of unknown and question came alive because of the statements in the poem. I like the ending. Made me desire to read and know more. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WaitForBetter

11 Years Ago

I tried to make it short leaving you wanting to read more, Its supposed to be like a dream when you .. read more

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Added on October 24, 2012
Last Updated on October 24, 2012
Tags: Noize, naked, fantasy, love, exposed

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WaitForBetter
WaitForBetter

Copenhagen, Denmark



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