Fountain Of Destiny

The Goddess of love's secret

Sunlight seeps through the cracks
Her soul forever silhouetted
Her tears disperse into the abyss
And re-emerge as the stars we know
As our hearts collide, a whisper of her name escapes my very lips

A million souls rejuvenated by her aura, and bow down in her presence,I remember a time when love used to love her. The Goddess of love remains mute to my requests, I'm unhinged beneath her spell once she manifests her woe

I long to sculpt my love upon her innocence
And for her love to intertwine eternally within my veins. I believed we possessed forever, when our souls interlinked. A night of shooting stars as I stare into her constellation I dare not blink

She maybe impaled to the Earth, bleeding drops of purity. Only with her, my face would be petrified as I welcome her magnificent purge onto me. As we flirt back and forth, oh yes I'm forever tempted to unmask her Godly beauty

Her damaged roots reject her endorphins
Poisoned is her photosynthesis the bringer of all light and the genesis of all which is pure.
Purgatory is what has become from the once pure garden of eden, So begins the search for the fountain of destiny.

Warren Daniel II

Author's Note

I would like to apologize in advance for any grammatical errors, honest thoughts are highly appriciated. Hope you enjoy the poem.

Reviews

[Jennifer Shaw]

So descriptive! It accurately captures and enchantingly displays the dark and magnificent essence of a beautiful, damaged woman and the way she is perceived by the one who loves her. It spoke to me on a deeply personal level. It was a privilege to read this.

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you so much I'm glad you liked it :)

[Jennifer Shaw]

You're quite welcome. =]

[Revolutionary]

Beautiful and spell bidding

[pvpd sri harsha]

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[eslaam]

nothing is like this love she is godly and earthly a te same time and her beauty remains secretly. because when you say godly is unknown your ver ywell spoken

[Mashairi]

Beautifully worded, and the imagery surges from the page. The way you describe her is so pure and beautiful, I was completely taken aback. Excellent work ^^

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you so much for your kind review, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[Mashairi]

Absolutely ^^

[pvpd sri harsha]

REALLY GOOD AND NICE WORK... THE BEAUTIFUL WAY OF DISCRIPTION...

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you so much for your kind review :)

[~]

A poem full of love in many layers. You have brought the beauty and the horrors of powerful connections..great imagery.. well done!!!

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you so much for your review it means so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[Helena]

An amazing poem Warren. I'm glad I drop by to read this.....it was a poetic treat. Well done!

Helena :)

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you so much for giving my work a read, your honest thoughts are highly appreciated

read moreThank you so much for giving my work a read, your honest thoughts are highly appreciated

Warren :)

[BClancy]

Great poem! I loved the rich and flowing verses and vocabulary, and you have some stunning imagery in here.

[Warren Daniel II]

Thanks! I really appreciate your honest thoughts.

[BClancy]

Your welcome :)

[TheLostMind]

I loved the detailed description in this one. The way you started this one is good. quite captivating. Good Job :)

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you so much for your kind words, your honest thoughts are appreciated

[Elisa]

This is my favorite poem of yours so far! "I long to sculpt my love upon her innocence". Wow.
So much amazing imagery that reflects so many deep issues. The only constructive criticism I can give is in the first line of the last stanza. I think the word you're looking for is endorphins. But yeah, amazing poem. Great job!