Fields of embodiment

You never know what life will put in your lap
when you go off the script
Knowledge is power
power is control

and you never really live until you

....lose control

Reviews

[Samuel Jack]

A short but powerful blow, I like the spacing of the words in the last section (stanza?) that pause really helped me to imagine someone speaking this like dialogue in a play. The meaning I took from this poem was that how ever much we build up our minds, sometimes only pure passion can release you. having to go off the script is very difficult for some people. This poem would be quite therapeutic for some people I know. Keep up the good work.

[WesleyAlexanderDavies]

cheers fella lot of positives don't hesitate to harsh i need it. criticism writers fuel, along with cheap whiskey