Screams of the Unfinished Son

Free.

Faint noises,

I hear the screams inside my mind

I realize that I am nothing compared to.

You watch me,

You stalk me,

All you do is follow my shadowy path

I have no where else to turn but you.

Save me my old friend.

See my pain.

I know it's hard to understand my Mind.

I know that all you do is look at me with those eyes,

Those great blue eyes.

I want to scream to you.

Hold you in my arms once again,

My father how I miss you.

My father. You were mine.

And you just,

Died right in front of my eyes and I could do nothing.

And I roared out to you.

How I screamed your name with absolute disgust for myself.

I tried so hard.

But no matter how hard I cried,

No matter how horrifyingly loud I pleaded,

You would not come back.

Daddy.

Please daddy I need you.

Guide me on the path of the lighthouse.

Before I lay on the floor

And die,

Just to see your wonderful face again.

Author's Note

Free.

Reviews

[Alexa Tasch]

really nice and really sad too. It flows well and carried a lot of emotion. Great poem!