Pure But Deadly

Pure But Deadly

A Poem by WhimsicalAsh
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Can't trust him...

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The light that he becons cannot be missed. 
You get pulled in without knowing the risks. 
His smile, his eyes, the way that he describes... you. 
But you find out it's an illusion. 
To feel wanted as his conclusion. 
To put a tattoo on your heart... 
But you know he can remove it.

© 2015 WhimsicalAsh


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I like this short piece. Powerful message and good imagery. I don't care for colored text; it's distracting and hard to read depending on the color choice. Good job. Keep at it.

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Added on August 30, 2015
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WhimsicalAsh
WhimsicalAsh

Tacoma, WA



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I am a teen who uses writing as one of my great escapes. Writing is a way to express the unexplainable thoughts that I develop, and can be an outlet when I have challenges in life. I mostly write poet.. more..

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